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You were
cream-colored coffee
upon ivory
white bed linens,
your tummy
consumed
the morning.

I was the shadow,
a whispered
desire.

@ @

© Oisin

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  • charcoal
    February 13
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    beautiful


    It seems I've made a discovery today but you've always been here (:


  • Kunzang
    January 11
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    simple and Beautiful, Oisin


  • Saffron gold member
    January 5

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    You have captured such loveliness in so few words--this is quite beautiful, Scott.



    Saffron


  • Nicolette gold member
    January 3

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    Very lovely, Scott...this reads like the memory of a morning song.

    ~ Nicolette


  • Night Hope gold member
    January 2

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    Ahhh, Scribe...I should think you were the light drifting through the lace curtain, painting tapestries across her skin...never a shadow, even one of desire. Lovely, my Friend.

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