mistaking for what I am not
...you are moving away,
you miss sweetness in my bosom
with your indifference.
my exterior is rough,
but skin deep.
just caress me, peel me,
I am very nectar,
to chew and rest on your tongue.
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feeling just a little unloved
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- feeling just a little unloved. by written-in-ink.
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i like the wy that you went with this
very nice feeling and flow
thank you -
fantastic metaphor
great dept
well done
God bless you...
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thank you very much
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true ,very true...enjoyed it
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