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Sexual Serenity

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Loves heated promises
couldn't suppress the silky
feel of clothes flowing;
deserting  m' shoulders
SWEET magic give it to me!
Sizzling firm armor
full heated assault
desires locked in cadence.
Calculated smooth steps
licking silk; induced groans
and screaming moans
as tongues surely reign
into  regal rhythmic beats
of sensual opus.
Serenity ordained m' lust...
sexually famished no more!
Take me; feed me that oral
sultry delight in the
shadows of silvery moonlight
over, over again.....
Music between sepia
soft thighs entwined
around his long legs
left m' taste-buds
wanton for more.

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prompt: " Artistic Seduction"

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  • Olea
    February 2, 2009
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    my. my. he will be wanton more. no doubt. fine sensuality here. -olea


  • Poetryintheblood gold member
    January 31, 2009
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    Thank you for your most beautifully sensual entry, good luck in my contest, Josie


  • Endeavor gold member
    January 16, 2009

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    Very Good


    Music between sepia
    soft thighs entwined
    around his long legs
    left m' taste-buds
    wanton for more.

    Very lovely words my friend
    Liked it all

    Rick


  • tomisb silver member
    January 4, 2009

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    Sorry for the time it took to take advantage of your invitation

    I love this ode to the joys of an inquisitive and soulful tongue. It gives new meaning to speaking in tongues. I love the sensuality, but most of all the glow of joy that surrounds the words I read. It demands a shared trust and a vulnerablity to really allow the joys of oral arts to be a feast of wonder and screams.
    Love, Tom B.


  • Diamond
    January 4, 2009

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    GULP!

    I was almost left speechles by this brilliant piece of sensual poetry. I definitely wanton more and more...but I'm satisfied with what you have given us the reader to feast on. Wonderful piece and best wishes for the contest. Avril


  • queenie gold member
    January 3, 2009

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    this is what i would call classy erotica. the results of your words is the romance in lust and not the act.you betray a different way of telling a lustful tale. my best to you in the contest.


  • Brazos silver member
    January 2, 2009

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    Is it hot in here, or is it just me? Rowwwwwwwf! Sweltering, baby, once again you have taken eroticism to new heights, and thrown me off the brink.

    See what happens when you start throwing your clothes off? More and more and more and more...

    I love you,
    Brazos


  • Abson
    January 2, 2009

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    A sultry and very seductive piece of erotica replete with very picturesque images that paints a perfect scenery for sexual serenity to thrive.Your careful choice of words did help the reader to paint a wonderful and captivating scenery on the readers mind depicting sultry longing and taste of exquisite pleasure./WELL DONE!!!


  • onesugar gold member
    January 2, 2009

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    Beautiful Novy, a stunning sensual write. Soft & sultry..beautiful through and through. A pleasure
    ~sugar~


  • Swangrnv gold member
    January 2, 2009

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    mmmmm..

    love this juicy sexy piece..m' thinks me likes what you do to m' loins!! absolutely tantalizing my friend!


  • Endeavor gold member
    January 2, 2009
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    Excellent


    Loves heated promises
    couldn't suppress the silky
    feel of clothes flowing;
    deserting m' shoulders
    SWEET magic give it to me!

    Wonderful opening words
    set the tone well

    Like it all

    Rick


  • PastelMoons gold member
    January 2, 2009

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    'Sizzling firm armor
    full heated assault'
    that verse is so sexy
    and sigh.... 'licking silk; induced groans'
    this is sumptuous!
    *fans self*
    thank you for sharing
    this sexy and saucy little piece
    ~Pastel


  • Riftkin gold member
    January 2, 2009
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    soft and sensual like the lady that wrote it. best of luck to you with this.

    Riftkin


  • Jeremy0826 gold member
    January 2, 2009

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    Simply beautiful! Thanks a lot for your entry
    in our contest. We wish you all the best with it
    and appreciate your entry!




    Jeremy0826


  • Pete Greenslade gold member
    January 1, 2009

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    sexual serenity,or activity,,is ok in my book,liberate and go for your needs. good luck, to you x x x


  • Angelflower
    January 1, 2009

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    beautifully written.. soft and seductive.. Made the air heat and the lung labor for more air a truly sensual write.. Best of luck in the contest!

    Angel


  • insideinsanity
    January 1, 2009
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    Mmmmm. Sulty and seductive.


    Funfunfun.


  • Ademon
    January 1, 2009
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    wow, talking about wanton for more...continue writing please! Nicely done!

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