what words cut deeper than any knife?
"i no longer love you,
i hate you"
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I hope that no one ever said that to you! You are a nice person and you have been so kind to me since I've been here on AP. It's sometimes hard for me to make new friends and I'm very grateful to have found one in you. May whatever guy that has ever said that to you in any part of your life lose their penis! HA! I just practically cursed those cheap smucks! ........oh! Great short!
RUBY@@@
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...this is so powerful in such few wrods. I have been here one too many times .And each time it breaks me even more. You think that you would become numb to it after awhile. But not myself unfortunately. I still believe in those who I should not, and it still stings me when they say such words. This really touched me. Thank you for sharing. Wonderful piece here.
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truly the worst words i have heard
blessings
Rend
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I should hope that no one hear these words, but unfortunately many people are mean and have no compassion to just be gentle when breaking up with someone.
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I suppose so, but I'm so used to hearing them and usually one after the other, so I suppose I get used to it.
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I guess you're right, once you hear certain things you really do get used to it. I know that it's been heard a lot but I just went with the flow and just let it out.
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