what goes around
comes around
you'll get yours
in the end
goodbye
so-called "friend"
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Like this short! Proof of the threefold Karma rule and the old fashioned golden rule. What you give out returns to you and the whole do good unto others as you would have done to you. Guess there are a lot of people who like to pretend to be friends cos boy I've had lots of those. That's what I get for moving all the time.
RUBY@@@
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I so hope that this is true, and that it will all come around in the end. I know a few poeple that have been a "so called friend." It is hard to let go of those things. But karma is a wonderful thing! Perfect piece displaying that very thing. Wonderful job poet.
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Very nice write, sometimes that is all you can do with certain people, is say goodbye.
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i couldn't agree more with your comment! i'm glad you liked it!
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Never a truer word expressed here. Well done!
Mariana
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thanks!
Thank you for your comment! I know that a lot of people know what this poem feels like. We seem to always go through these things. Either it's the guy that we date that destroys the friendship when he breaks things off, or it's a female friend that basically backstabs.
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I know how you feel here, except if you replace the word friend with ex, considering he's the one who'll get his in time.
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I wrote this about both ex boyfriend and an ex friend (female). Kinda sucks when friends backstab you. :0(
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