A melting forgotten flavor,
dazed azure moon,
heart zips.
Author notes
Prompt: Blue Ball
9 words
A contest entry
- astound me by Lavender Butterfly.
550 points, ended January 2, 19 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Hopefully waiting for your precious comments
Comments
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completely engaging... x
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A bit abstract, but a smooth collective piece.
I like the *halt*, in the last line.
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it all runs liquidly solid together
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