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My Agony

my life is spiraling downwards
i cannot take this pain
the voices in my mind
are driving me insane

my heart is shattered into pieces
i'm drowning in my tears
looking hard for a simple answer
to extinguish all my fears

my thoughts are clouded by a mist
confusion rules over all
so many dark faces in my mind
laughing as i fall

it's not that i want to die
i'm just tired of being me
so someone take a gun
shoot me and end my misery

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  • great poem

    ♥all ur poems are great and its sad that things so tradgic have happned in ur life, if i could change it i would just know were all here for u ♥

  • traveon100
    January 1
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    Truly agonizing

    This poem is so simple, yet it full of emotion. I truly brought back some tears. I'm almost at the point where every second of the day i'm hoping that someone run me over with a truck, or shoot me, or blow the whole world away.

    it's not that i want to die
    i'm just tired of being me
    so someone take a gun
    shoot me and end my misery

    sums up exactly how i feel. Great poem. Thank you.

  • XmmusicXloverrX
    January 1
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    Great poem


  • darkheart76
    January 1
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    great

    i think we all have days like this