my life is spiraling downwards
i cannot take this pain
the voices in my mind
are driving me insane
my heart is shattered into pieces
i'm drowning in my tears
looking hard for a simple answer
to extinguish all my fears
my thoughts are clouded by a mist
confusion rules over all
so many dark faces in my mind
laughing as i fall
it's not that i want to die
i'm just tired of being me
so someone take a gun
shoot me and end my misery
What did you think
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great poem
♥all ur poems are great and its sad that things so tradgic have happned in ur life, if i could change it i would just know were all here for u ♥ -
Truly agonizing
This poem is so simple, yet it full of emotion. I truly brought back some tears. I'm almost at the point where every second of the day i'm hoping that someone run me over with a truck, or shoot me, or blow the whole world away.
it's not that i want to die
i'm just tired of being me
so someone take a gun
shoot me and end my misery
sums up exactly how i feel. Great poem. Thank you. -
Great poem
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great
i think we all have days like this

