Why would you leave me
Oh can't you see
I'd do anything for you
Its you my heart pursues
Can't I do anything
Why do you keep fleeing
I want you stay
But all you do is run away
Did I do too much
Or not enough
Why won't you just answer me
Is there something that I cannot see
I long to be with you
What is it you want me to do
Nothing at all
Has our love made the great fall
Author notes
prompt "Running Away by Hoobastank"
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Very sad - I think anyone who's ever been in a relationship could identify with this one.
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Is a great take on the song hun x You add your own twist to it and leave the reader wanting to make amense and hold you and never let go xx
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well done . . so true . . best of luck in the contest !!
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This is pretty good. Nice take on the song
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Yay! Finally a comment... LOL! Thank you!!! ♥
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