painting's boy
almost threw snow;
slate eye
preempted suspension
A contest entry
- astound me by Lavender Butterfly.
550 points, ended January 2, 19 entries
Honorable mention
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
please leave off good luck, unnatural emoticons, applause symbols...hypes
Comments
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out of the box ~ intriguing and engaging... x
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Lavender Butterfly I felt moving onto something
thanks, this proved lingerable for readers of house after stored sharing --
I appreciate the honorable mention; from this one it makes me want to start my concept metaphor competition but I have to wait for collaborator,
called Carolyn
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Sounds like a poem about a painting. Did you have another influence?
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insideinsanity thanks for wanting a whole read
you got it, the particulars being I was captivated by this game artwork until a guy had me turn to talk about why...
and now same face unlocks an askance kick of energy ~
thanks for commenting,
called Carolyn
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Ahh! Well, that certainly sheds some light on the occasion.
Wonderful job, all in all.
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this is really beautiful. once thing though..."clasically" should be classically. that's all.
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Amaranthine Lover I updated because of you
thanks so much for finding the endearing quality, even under editing need!
how nice, and funny since I was staring at that word in submitting thinking something was amiss... and I kept checking its ending side for some typical typo. but was satisfied though confusedly by what still bothered -- without actual dictionary scope again or a friendly one lol
I really appreciate your stopping by,
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well it's just a really lovely piece
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