It's that time again;
As my mind assures me I'm still here, in vain.
I lost all sense of you since that day,
I remembered your touch and the beautiful way
That your hair always smelled of tulips and vanilla.
I felt your hand rise up against mine and we became
A dream come true.
I never lost sight of you,
Kept you close to home, as some would say.
We became another person in whole,
In my dreams I felt you inside of me.
I could hear in the distance a slight sound of crying,
In the back of my heart I wanted to touch you,
Even knowing you were dying.
I kissed your sweet lips when you said you wouldn't have me,
Touched your beautiful ash brown hair.
I could smell the blood, it was everywhere...
It's time I wake up?
I can't escape what I've done to you,
If only you had taken me to be yours.
I wouldn't have to see the mess I left of you,
All over my kitchen floor.
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Another pain in the @$$ rule. heh.
love hurts? haha
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lol yeahh i tried to make it pretty visual on the love.. and creepiness haha
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OMG! Stalker much? LOL. This had the most unexpected twist! I'm reading thinking this is beautiful! Then I get to the end and that changes to ... and morbid! Regardless it's a great write, lol. Still shaking my head. lol OMG!!!
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reading it again, i find it kind of funny
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