my reflection
- a ghost
in your dull
blue eyes
A contest entry
- astound me by Lavender Butterfly.
550 points, ended January 2, 19 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Please tell me what you think
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wonderful imagery... x
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Ohh! Very nice. The image is so true, a haunting reminder of ourself, perhaps, in others.
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a cold write, nicely worded. best wishes in the contest ~
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wow
really
really
good
i love it. -
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=) thank you
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