Such an unpleasant sight,
Kills left and right!
Not so long ago I was a FATHER,
Now I'm present in a slaughter!
Not even a single LAUREL could survive this field of despair
My heart felt like a TIMEBOMB, something I could not bare!
The TERROR runs hard through my veins,
These WARS only leave ASHES, so inhuman!
More than a SOLDIER I feel like a CLOWN,
The SONG of the flying bullets are a horrible sound!
This fear was greater than that of a SCYTHE stab
Coming from an INTIMATE friend, carrying great wrath!
The only thing keeping me alive, sound and save,
Is my little DIAMOND ARMLET my grandfather gave.
He passed it down after his DEMISE,
It helped him get through WAR, strong and wise...
Author notes
Sylar wouldn't fear war though...
A contest entry
- Prompts AGAIN! (MANY 2 CHOOSE FROM!) by Heroesrox.
550 points, ended January 6, 12 entries
Honorable mention
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Good? Bad? Ok?
Comments
-
wow!!i don't know but i like this poem....
i don't see mistakes...i can be wrong.
and, yes!you used really well the given words!!
oh, good luck in the contest!!
-
Very good piece. Thanks so much for entering my contest! I really like the way you used the given words. Awesome job!
Adding your comment:
