Success from failure
Failure from success
Only few care
But not for the rest
We all fail and succeed
Life is funny how it plays that way
Yet some people from failure
They cannot sway
When we fail
We look past success
When do not fail
Our souls are temporarily out of diress
Failures should help us
We should realize that
That we should be happy with success
Be happy with our lives and where we're at
Author notes
prompt "FAILURES make us realize the importance of success"
In a list
A contest entry
- FAILURES make us realize th importance of success by Purush.
650 points, ended January 1, 11 entries
Honorable mention
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest - all the prewrites you want (theres a catch) by serenity silvermoon.
400 points, ended January 7, 299 entries
Honorable mention
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18000 points, ended April 28, 1011 entries
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What did you think
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Aha, another wise write from you, I suspect you wrote the Pain and Beauty poem too
This was along very much the same lines, and I enjoyed this one too, although I did feel that this verse was a little forced in the use of rhyming;
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When we fail
We look past success
When do not fail
Our souls are temporarily out of diress"
However, on the whole, it was well written, and the rhymes were spot on apart from that!
Thanks for entering
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very well written poem you have here some of us do learn from are failures and others fall from them keep writing and i will hope to keep reading great job on the trophy and good luck
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A very well deserved hm and a fine poem here. Some good stuff coming from you!
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Congratulations on the HM. You've got a very good grasp on failures and success. There's a lot of wisdom here. Well done.
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Life is funny how it plays that way
Yet some people from failure
Is it incomplete
if so edit it
good treat of the subject straight from the veins
Al the best in my contest -
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i meant for it to flow into the next line. i've spaced it out so the reader can see it easier ^.^ Thank you!
♥ Kathraina
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