Majestic mystery,
balancing in space;
...We can't fake understanding.
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the spacing serves the context
you tab things from claimable to observable for sequential conclusion. and we often don't make sense but through our senses and yet there was trust to be found before astronomical equilibrium of our globe becomes undeniably beautiful, as you galactically expatiated in your piece. so much in the positioning to not falsify.
microscopic to macroscopic acknowledgements are among leads
talented inclusion,
called Carolyn
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For such a short poem, you have made an incredible impact. Congratulations on capturing the essence of what a profoundly written poem should be.
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profoundly drawn... x
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Profoundly true. A great take on it.
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awesome
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I love this poem so much.
It's gorgeous.
and the last line is just amazing.
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A lovely piece, my best wishes.
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