Don’t open my door
Don’t look inside
Just to see me lying on the floor
Don’t examine my demise
There was no foul play
I’ve just ended the game
My fingerprints are on the bottle
I’ve taken my last breath
This is my suicide note
There was nothing left
Please don’t miss me
I’ve left nothing good behind
Tell mom I’m sorry
For making her cry
There was no foul play
I’ve just ended the game
My fingerprints are on the bottle
I’ve taken my last breath
This is my suicide note
There was nothing left
Tell Sam it wasn’t her fault
Tell Sabrina life’s still worth a try
Never again will I be there
To help her when she cries
Tell Mia
who always believed in me
That I was more broken
than she could ever see
To all the kids at school
I’ll see them all in hell
They never took the time
To see me at all
There was no foul play
I did this to myself
I ended the game
My fingerprints are on the bottle
I’ve taken my last breath
This is my suicide note
There was nothing left
I know I held the world
In the palm of my hand
But I couldn’t face it
I had to wear a mask
I couldn’t face myself
So I had to wear this mask
There was no foul play
I just ended the game
My fingerprints are on the bottle
I’ve taken my last breath
This is my suicide note
There was nothing left
Author notes
this isnt an actual suicide note its a poem i just really needed to get all this out
In a list
A contest entry
- Emo/ Death/ Abuse by Violent Glass.
550 points, ended February 13, 59 entries
Bronze trophy winner
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Comments
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Wow I hope you still don't feel like that.
I know how that feels. I hope you do well in my contest and thanks for entering.
-Jess
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im not saying that i dont like this, cause it is really good, but im not looking for suicide poetry for this contest. none the less, i hope that you are feeling better, and im here if you need to talk. dont stop writing.
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great write congrats on bronze and good luck in the next contest...... i sing it cause i felt it in this write.... thanks for sharing hugs
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Wow this poem was really well done, a lot of emotion you are a great poet! Thanks for entering my contest and the best of luck
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wow this was AMAZING
i loved it, i really did
i could so relate to it
and you put it together beautifully
thanx for sharing with me!!!
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many have felt this before. even if just for a second. you've captured the feeling well. great write.
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i know what its like to feel that way and hurt others but what you do,
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I feel your pain
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thats so tru.
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This was amazing. There are seriosuly no words for how good this is.
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loed this, i could feel the emotion
xxx
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