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so close but so far away

a smile you could see from a far
a face that never brought you down
hugs that explained that they would never leave
words that would be spoken that said i will never be gone

but where are you now
your looking down upon me
and i hope your watching closely....

your in a better place now and time and time again
we will think about all the memories that were brought to us by you....

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