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tiffany rae

theres a smile upon her face
which died away...
so many greetings as you pass her by
that they just fled away...

as she feel in love
a part of sadness dawned upon
she was gone in just months...

the love that was to love
was to blame....

as to why the love did this
no one seems to kno...

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