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bouncy balls








you can't pretend I'm a toy anymore





I'm real

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so stop trying to balance me on your fingers.

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  • letters to no one
    January 9

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    I kinda think this should have won gold.

    I REALLY REALLY REALLY like this


    Just, WOW

    Shelly
    x


  • broken-colours
    January 3

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    Congrats on the HM, hun.

    This was definitely super powerful. One of those that's short but packs a punch. Wish I could do that.

    :]


  • Lavender Butterfly silver member
    January 1
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    This holds such meaning... x


  • insideinsanity
    January 1
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    Hmmm! Quite nice. I can think of a dozen things this actually relates to...


  • new born
    January 1
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    SImple, short, beautiful, incredible. Great job. I really don't know what else to say, for nine words, this speaks volumes, all of which speak for themselves.


  • Venugopal gold member
    January 1
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    yes, you are grown up

    all the best


  • Kiss the girl--x
    January 1

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    i love how your authors notes merge with your words, it's amazing.

    everything i read of yours is amazing.
    i'd complain and say it wasn't fair,
    but i love having stuff to read

    ♥


  • luna-midnight gold member
    January 1

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    hahahaha love this like woooohooooo. you're amazing, good luck and take care
    Stephanie ♥


  • mbm
    January 1

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    content's not so tiny

    the distinctiveness of first assertion comes with that self evidence of "I'm real" made for mutual awareness. significant psychologically towards physical success to come down from say manipulation of object application.

    strong stepped back tone

    it's quite compelling in simple way even, as if hamster gets noticed in sphere picked up by child lol; or box looking like a robot creatively until mouse keeps tipping trap instead of a battery haha to aahh in grasp

    sadly it also makes me think of danger baby is put through to show early balance on a hand...
    called Carolyn


  • inkstaind
    January 1
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    wow. I love the way you used the prompt, this is wonderful


  • Swan song gold member
    January 1
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    LOL I think that carries some weight lol
    Good luck!


  • Topaze gold member
    January 1
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    Nice take, my best wishes.

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