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The Darkness Within

The Darkness Within

the tale of the demon within

In collaboration with Rackeel

Wielding high
as the wind blows
drifting deeper
Into the shadows
wishing into the wind

So deep

you look inside
too see the willow weep
tears so strong
that you can not

Bare

Blood Boiling
as you stare
at a blank wall

Lost within the wind
voices come
so deep within

Laughter

drifting dreaming
of another time
In another realm
darkness held
with laughter
in day light
hopes of

looking within

I see you standing there
in a hopeless daze
see the demon within
capturing hopeless
day

as you look

standing in a mirror

wall

you see yourself
in a crimson fall
drifting deeper
inside this hold so willing
to capture moments
like a picture in a hole

to the holy one
blank faces
are haunting dreams
blank eye
fire

crackling dreams

eternal loneliness

Rising from within,
Finding the deep eternal wind
Mind soul spirit way
Power rises to the day.

Power finds self
Self finds power
Powerful way
Guide the day.

Falling from the above
The wind catches thine soul
The earth brings about atoll
Reality brings about the way.

the way that we view
the soul and life
In eternal Damned
Gripping Upon the ground
looking in silence

darkness
Not a sound
Empty dreams Play upon
empty souls
Eternally damned

Lost

Drifting

The foul air of the past
The sweet smell of the future
Guide the haunted soul of eternity,
As it flows through infinity,
Learning the ways of many.

Tempered steel forged in the fire of belief
Reinforced steel swings against unfaithful
Pain courses through non-belief,
Simplicity brings about relief.
False idols guide the ignorant
Steeples guide the misguided,
Word guides those of power.
The soul holds its own hour.
Time guides its way
Through dismay.

© Lucian Valcor & Rackeel 2005

Author notes

after a long search I have recovered some poems of mine that I thought was lost with time a lot of these have brought back many many memories I hope you enjoy them as much as I have

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Comments

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  • It reads very smoothly and as it went on i felt darker. Amazing poem you wished to portray darkness you pulled it off 100%.

  • crosscountry07
    February 10
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    Awesome write Lucian! Been awhile since I've seen you around. Hope all is well!! -Liz


    • Lucian Valcor
      February 12
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      thanks liz how have you been ? yeah ive taken a break from the site for a while i still stop in every once in a while glad to hear from you and hope life is treating you well

      Lucian"


  • Midnight Raeven
    January 3

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    Wow, reading your older stuff is like seeing a whole other side to you, Baby!

    This was full of emotion and wonderful imagery!

    Keep up the hard work!

    Your loving wife,

    Midnight Raeven


  • blueyez
    January 2
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    hmmmm schizophrenia lol! Nice write!
    Peace and love

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