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Suspended

Mysterious allure
Orchestrated grace

Melodic love
Tight embrace

Pressing deep
Tender caress

Quivering lips
Absent dress

Gentle touch
Heart-stopping kiss

Profound desire
Suspended bliss

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Written February 12th, 2004

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  • Mr Dazgy
    March 19, 2004
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    Ahh liked this one , brought back memories of when I was a teenager and love and sex were all mysterious and so very exciting! wonderful!you have captured a special moment in time with great clarity nad thought. Exellent. Craig x