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Perfection

Sky of infinite blue
Clouds of spotless white
Lush whispering willows
Bathed in golden light
The rolling hills are emerald
And dotted with purple hues
Graceful lilies are swaying
Reflected in pools clear through
Crystal fountains are splashing
Surrounded by pebbles of grey
Butterflies dance in the breeze
And laughter fills the day.

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  • Signe
    January 1, 2009

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    Beautiful

    Life unfortunately isn't perfect, but it's nice to write poems about the perfect day! This poem feels like it's about those few days in life when at least most things are perfect. It reminds me of my little cousins, spending time with them on summer days.