Once again me ship an' I be lost at sea,
Too busy drinknig our rum t' pay attention,
T' 'ere we 'ere sailin' or how fast.
Author notes
Prompt: 3 lines of ocean.
A contest entry
- Ocean Haiku poems for Chocolate-eating Peg-leg Pirate Group by Blossom Fairy.
750 points, ended January 6, 14 entries
Bronze trophy winner
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Please tell me what you think
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Love that one
Very good.
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Hahahaha,
You did really well sounding like a tipsy pirate
Nice job Meroza and all the best to you in the contest
Ken
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But I am a tipsy pirate
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hahahahahaha,
are ya?
I didnt know you 'were' a pirate
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I be a captain on th' golden arrow, first female captain too. Behold!
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Grrrrrr!! Ai..Ai Captain,
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haha
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You are always so good at pirate poems. I love how you bring that vibe into the poem.
Very creative and well thought out for just three lines of ocean!
Good luck in the contest
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AHOY! Good Meroza, are ye bein' havin' a good New Year? Are ye on land or still afloat? I love yer poem.
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The magical seabird melodies sent ou' guided me aft onto land again, so now I be plunderin' me fridge in a epic quest o' findin' food, nay good luck so far.
And ye I had a good new year, hope ye did be havin' one as well
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Spoken truly, by a pirate lass...
I shall send out the magic seabirds to guide you back to land, good Meroza. You are our Pirate Princess and we must keep you safe so that you can keep up your good work of luring all the sea's villains to their final reward in the ocean's grave. A wonderful poem! 
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Thank ye lass
't be good t' get aft on solid poop deck again, an' thank ye fer yer comment
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Interesting.
I liked the use of 'pirate' talk. Arrrrgh! 
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Thank ye
'Tis rather fun t' talk this way
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