How are you tonight I’m kind of tired but I hope you’re all right. I sometimes wonder how you can stand all the bickering that goes on by us humans. You’ve given us so much and yet when it counts we quickly forget from where it came. When was the last time some one just prayed for the beauty that is life the gift of being alive. I wonder has anyone just prayed for you.
I was sitting here thinking if there was a way I could do something for you and It’s kind of like giving a present to the man who has everything. Then of course I’ve always been told that telling all about your glory, witnessing to the many ways you’ve shown your magnificence is what you most desire. But on a more personal note is there anything you want that I could do you know I’d do it if you let me know.
I don’t claim to be a powerful being wielding any wondrous powers and such. I’m just a simple woman that loves you so very, very much. Anyway I’ve probably taken up too much of your precious time so I’ll just end by saying I’m here if you need me to do anything for you or anything at all in your name.
Your devoted believer,
Smonte19124
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This is so beautiful and thoughtful!
Your words are so true here. We often
ask for so much and forget to give back
to the Lord. This letter of yours really
made me smile. Thanks for sharing it
and good luck to you with it my friend!
Jeremy0826
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Thank you so very much my friend for the kindness of your words they are really appreciated. It is always a pleasure to hear from you Jeremy, Be well and God Bless, Jo-Ann
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This touched me on such a personal level. I've spent so many wasted hours running from God, trying to avoid Him at all costs, but He always finds me. He whispers to my soul when I need Him the most, yet seek Him the least.
Your poem/letter is uplifting.
Monica
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I thank you for your beautiful words of encouragement that helps me to stay focus and I am so very proud if my humble words helped you in anyway. Stay strong in your walk with the Lord I have come to realize that its not just a phrase I read somewhere that when I thought I was alone God was there and carrying me; looking back there's no other way I could have made it through. God Bless you my friend, Jo-Ann
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I really like how you turned this around...us thinking about Him for Him...not for us. Beautifully written.
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Thank you my friend for taking the time to stop by and for the generousity of your words. God Bless, Jo-Ann
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your letter to Him is amazing, and your words poured out from your heart. emotional and heartfelt poem. thanks for sharing smonte. =)
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Thank you so very much for taking the time to read and leaving such a nice comment. God Bless, Jo-Ann
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Sis what a heartfelt and inspirational write. I too believe we should thank God each day for his wonderful blessings, what a wonderful letter to God, thanks for sharing, hugs and love your sis
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Thank you Theresa I so much enjoy your stopping by for you always leave such kind words of praise. God Bless Sis. Jo-Ann
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Aw, so sweet!
It is the simple, sincere things that matter; from the heart where God dwells within you. And you wrote this straight from your precious heart. This is such a beautiful letter that you wrote to God. Very moving and heartfelt.
Karen
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Thank you so very much my friend for stopping by and leaving the kindness of your words. God Bless, Jo-Ann
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A very powerful and personal letter, personally I would have liked a bit more imagery and a bit more abstract thinking -
but that is no fault against this, it is very well written -
" I’m here if you need me "
i love that (:
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Thank you so much my friend for taking the time to stop by and leaving the kindness of your words. God Bless, Jo-Ann
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