Melancholy love,
Hindered inside her mind.
His lips, pressing against anothers
Was her only thought.
Enough tears, this was it.
She disposed his things,
And celebrated the new year,
Alone.
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30 words
Amarinthine Lover
A contest entry
- 2009; by amaranthine lover.
463 points, ended January 4, 7 entries
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Aww Jax, this is so emotional
but expressed very beautifully..
the ending really got me,
tugged at my heartstrings (yes jackie, even though i pick on ya i DO have a heart!! and i do love ya froglegs) =]
anyways this was a little masterpiece
keep up the good work & don't worry..
it's HIS loss, not yours.. you are way too
good for him.
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such a sad way to spend a new year
if only things could have turned out better
but you have penned your emotions well -
Word Count 31
a very honest and fresh look at the prompt. You tell a whole story with your simple choice in words and you captivate your audience rather well. I am impressed! Keep writing fellow poet friend!
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