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Lucky!

Well, happy 47thn to you!
You're just 47 years new.
Although you've mellowed alot..
you're just a babe...a little tot!
Well, maybe not a tot..but we all like you alot.
You look great for your age.
Not like a gnarled old sage.
Gee! Am I getting through?
I think you're lucky to be you!

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  • Pisces rainbow
    January 2, 2009

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    47 for me is just around the corner not yet feeling it

    love your rhyme what a great way to look life and age

    very uplifting and delightful write

    God bless you my friend...


  • stavykm gold member
    January 2, 2009
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    This is Fun

    Thank you for keeping this so light hearted. This was fun and I chuckled which is great and what I was hoping for. You are ever so kind and best wishes in the contest and thank you for entering and wishing me a Happy Birthday. This is my Birthday party here on AP...LOL

    Wishing You Many Blessings,
    Much Love,
    Kelle Marie


  • catz Moderators member
    January 1, 2009

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    this is such a cool poem... humorous, sincere and filled with warm birthday wishes for Kelle
    Good luck in the contest

    Dee


  • SilverButterfly gold member
    January 1, 2009

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    oh this is cute!!! I bet it puts a grin on Kelle's face.

    She is young and pretty for her YOUNG age huh?

    Best wishes to you!

    SilverButterfly

  • Judith Chandler
    January 1, 2009

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    You look happy, for the most part, though there has been sorrow and you seem busy. I think that's so important.

    Like this write.

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