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Ashes to Ashes

I lay it open, yours to hold

Screams surround the tale untold

Slip away, cry if you must

Minds do wander, a circle of distrust

Beckon the light, The Devil's mere wish

The deal is done and sealed with a kiss

I have not seen the wake of dawn

Where shall I weep when the pillow is gone?

Prayers withered in the eyes of lust

Ashes to ashes, dust to dust.

Author notes

A slightly edited verison of a poem I wrote for a boyfriend...
Written October 28th, 2002

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  • finding myself 84
    February 15, 2004
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    This is amazing... I don't even know what to say! I am so speechless. You left one of the nicest comments on my poem and I don't even know what to say about this other then it's amazing. Don't change a thing about it... beautifully penned! *sonya*