Wishing I could forget you forever,
How long have I suffered knowing your name?
Only to find it glued to my mind,
As I try to pry it loose.
Rememberance is the bane of me,
Ever keeping you alive in my mind.
You have always been to me,
Only
Unforgettable.
A contest entry
- Opposite Acrostics!! by brightXdarkness.
600 points, ended January 10, 20 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Please tell me what you think
Comments
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well done
very good poem and acrostic on top of that, very cleverly done, I liked it very much
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Nicely expressed.
The poem goes well with the Acrostic title.
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I like this. I liked it because I felt that this is a topic that many people, myself included, can relate to. Reading it down added a twist to it that made it seem almost as if it were talking about a lost friend or ex boyfriend who had changed. You remembered them when they were who they were, and you somehow can't shake that memory. However, looking at them now, it makes you wonder... who are they?
Thank you so much for entering your poem into my contest, and best of luck to you in having done so!!
Alex
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