"Leave!", He said
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She's closing up like petals at night,
thinking of love, life, everything gone...
if she goes back home to life as normal,
realizing how empty she was starting to become,
sinking deeper as she gives him that power....
A contest entry
- feeling just a little unloved. by written-in-ink.
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Comments
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very nice spacing
and i liked it
thank you -
yes i agree with judy[?] because i have done i many to many times jsut givein soeon the power to control all emotions isnt the best idea it makes you a puppet
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The last line happens to women more often than I like to think.
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