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~ If ~

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If I should live another day,

I would say I was blessed

to have lived that day with

you.

           

 

If I could kiss one more time

let it be you that moves my

soul to place such a kiss,

 

          

 

If I could go back into yesterday

I would not change loving you

more,

 

            

If I could find a song in my

heart to sing, let it be of you

 

        

 

~Loving me~

 

 

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  • TwiztidMaggot
    May 5

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    wow this was really good. This explains how I feel about my boyfriend. I absolutely enjoyed reading this piece. Keep up your amazig work and best of luck!

    CrimsonViper


  • aboomer silver member
    April 6
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    wow - this is beautiful! So deeply romantic, full of love.
    Great job!!


    • Rend the Veil gold member
      April 6
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      Thank you so much for stopping by

      your comments mean alot to me!

      Blessings

      Rend


  • StevieE
    March 10
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    This is very sweet

    Rend I thought this was so sweet. I enjoyed it very much. You are a talented writer.


    • Rend the Veil gold member
      April 6
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      Stevie Oh my sweet Soul twin,

      I hope you come back soon, I am so sorry for not returning the favor asap! your a sweet heart for commenting!

      Blessings

      Rend


  • Swangrnv gold member
    February 11
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    another...

    beautiful write, it is very clear i've stumble upon a true romantic..god bless your tender heart!


    • Rend the Veil gold member
      April 6
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      what a treat! thank you so much for stopping

      by and commenting I am so sorry i am so late, what a blessing to me
      I will returen the favor
      Blessings

      Rend


  • kiwigirljacks gold member
    January 7
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    A lovely piece of longing here! Again, I have indeed felt these emotions before!


    • Rend the Veil gold member
      April 6
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      what since January! I have dropped the dang

      ball again, I am so sorry! thank you so much for coming by and commenting, I will gladly return the favor sis,
      Love and blessings

      Rend


  • Rose Angel gold member
    January 6
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    Lovely written...from the heart....I like these poems...They make you. Mom


    • Rend the Veil gold member
      April 6
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      Mom thank you so much

      I am so sorry i am late to comment back,
      but know i so appreciate your visits



      Rend

  • friend
    January 3
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    someone's got your heart. that's really nice. bet they loved it.


    • Rend the Veil gold member
      January 4
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      Hello My "Friend"

      Thank you so much for coming by and comminting.
      I apreciate your comments always

      Rend


  • PrincessOfFire
    January 2

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    This is so beautiful!!!!!!!!!!!!!! I couldn't had said it better myself. You've outdone yourself with this quip of love. Rose


    • Rend the Veil gold member
      January 2
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      Hey sis

      thank you so much for coming by,
      were you been?? i missed you

      Blessings

      Rend


  • DolceVito gold member
    January 2

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    Stunning

    Awesome, Rend...Okay, you may kiss me again. Kidding aside, beutifully expressed write, highly enjoyable read, deserving.

    Vito


    • Rend the Veil gold member
      January 2
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      Hey Vito

      One of my ever faithful friends, if my heart was falling to the ground , that commnet alone would catch it, you are laughs and a very sweet friend to have.

      Blessings

      Rend

  • silverfish
    January 1

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    heart on a sleeve

    the soft pleading, aching sentiment of this small poem hits the sweet spot of the contest, and the reader's heart. so you don't need the little valentines between stanzas, in my opinion. -yourstrulyfish


    • Rend the Veil gold member
      January 2
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      Thank you so much

      for your input, I am very grateful for your time you give me
      when you read my writes,

      Blessings

      Rend


  • doolie gold member
    January 1
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    Lovely write. Good luck in the contest.

    Laura

    • Rend the Veil gold member
      January 2

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      thank you so much

      Doolie, for coming by and commenting
      that was a blessing

      Rend


  • Nevel
    January 1

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    nicely done....the repetition of the word "if" works well..and hold tight your attention. A lovely poem

    Erwin


    • Rend the Veil gold member
      January 2
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      thank you Erwin,

      your comments are always welcomed, i am honored when you come by
      and pay me a visit,

      Blessings

      Rend


  • Maxboy gold member
    January 1
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    This is wonderful, so soft and gentle.

    Beautiful....Best wishes in the contest

    • Rend the Veil gold member
      January 2
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      ever faithful friend

      thank you so much for coming by and commenting on my poem

      Blessings

      Rend


  • Swan song gold member
    January 1
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    Oh my!!! dear you stunned my heart!!!!

    This was beautiful! It touched me very tenderly


    • Rend the Veil gold member
      January 2
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      Thank you so much

      for your comment, i apreciate them so much,
      I have been reading your poems all day and havent had time to comment but they are awesome! you are just whipping them out so fast! each and every one of them are awesome!

      Thank you again

      Rend

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