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New Orleans

Long before August of 2005
this city was swept by a vicious tide.
Now we're hoping for better, getting the worst.
Feels like somebody's snatched our purse.
Rent and utilities are obscenely high.
Two jobs are needed just to get by.
Children are bussed miles due to  "lack of space".
Yet neighborhood schools sit empty all over the place.
Claiming a lack of revenue, RSD's doing the best they say they can do.
But, we have city officials driving big cars and pumping free gas.
While the parents of these children bust their ass,

still come up short on food, clothes and cash.
Come on y'all something ain't right.
Did those federal dollars just up and take flight?
We understand the city is struggling with post-storm reconstruction.
but, it still seems business as usual with political corruption.
What's up Ray Nagin?
I think you better check your boys before you're likened to Dicken's Fagin.
With parts of New Orleans still just desolate space,
your former supporters want to get in your face.
For too many years, we've lived with graft, bloodshed and tears.
We became known as the city that care forgot.
Is anybody ready to have this moniker dropped?
If we get off our collective ass we can make our infamy a thing of the past.
See, no matter how far we go or how long we stay gone,
This city is still our home.

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  • Andre ben-YEHU
    September 8

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    Wise ponderings...



    Very interesting political view on the matters and needs of the community. It is always a moment of honor to read a Poet that makes the difference. "New Orleans"
    rings the BELLS OF JUSTICE.

    Thank You for sharing this Torch of Consciousness.

    In respect and admiration,

    Andre Emmanuel Bendavi ben-YEHU


  • Ellis gold member
    August 18

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    Maybe you should run for City Councilwoman.

    You would be a good TV reporter chronicling this stuff. You have the looks for it.


  • ladylyric
    July 1

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    I know..it's like they forgot about you guys. It's just a sad, sad case. I hope you get your beloved city back.

  • I have always been a fan of New Orleans and this is such a powerful beautiful poem indeed here...Love to New Orleans from Scotland...Hazel


  • Emile
    June 13
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    Good

    This is a powerful poem that is so honest in its statement and delivery that it riles the heart. Your words are simple, yet so strong and layered with imagery and emotion. You paint a picture with words that bring your experiences alive in the reader's mind. Good work!

  • Tight and Succinct

    Great writing! I like how you tell it like it is with a wonderful flow of words that really works.


  • ToXiC-AnGeL gold member
    January 10
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    I live in Australia and was devastated for New Orleans when I heard about this , this was a terrific piece of writing ,I hope that all of New Orleans is recovered and that nothing like that ever happens again .. Love From Downunder (some of us do care about the rest of the world)


  • rinzurajan
    January 10

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    an eye opener...and really sad...no matter what the situations is u can't leave ur home...!!!

    god bless


  • Luciferschild
    January 8
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    sad poem, i think most of the problem is that people in other cities and states have no idea whats going on and if they do they just pass it off as irrelevant, i hope this gets some attention because personally as guy living in california i was under the impression that everything was over and done in New Orleans. Great eye opening poem

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