Here I am all alone in a crowded house.
TV's, stereos blaring yet it's quiet as a mouse.
This feeling churning in my gut, I don't know what to do.
The only thing I know, is I'd rather be with you.
I'd rather be with you, walking hand in hand.
On a lonely beach, barefoot in the sand.
On a mountain top. Anywhere will do.
Anywhere is fine, as long as I'm with you.
With you I feel at ease, I'm totally at home.
Like we were meant to be, from you I'd never roam.
There'll be some stress ahead, challenges to work through.
The only thing I know, is I'd rather be with you.
I'd rather be with you, walking hand in hand.
On a lonely beach, barefoot in the sand.
On a crowded street or a mountain side,
As long as I'm with you, I'll be satisfied.
Just be with you, your beauty and your charms.
Sitting on the couch, watching movies in my arms.
We'll sing and laugh and cry, just like happy people do.
The only thing I know, is I'd rather be with you.
I'd rather be with you, walking hand in hand.
On a lonely beach, barefoot in the sand.
On a crowded street or a mountain side,
As long as I'm with you, I'll be satisfied.
I'd rather be with you, walking hand in hand.
On a lonely beach, barefoot in the sand.
On a mountain top. Anywhere will do.
Anywhere is fine, as long as I'm with you.
A contest entry
- all the prewrites you want (theres a catch) by serenity silvermoon.
400 points, ended January 7, 299 entries
Honorable mention
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest - Whispers of the Muse by SubKitten.
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Please tell me what you think
Comments
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Very cute and emotional lyrics. But the rhyme scheme I think really detracts from it on a whole. And the over-use of punctuation throws off the flow of the piece.
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Very nice Bob. You tend to catch the imagination when you write,I can almost picture the sand.
Great piece
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very wonderful and very romanic you have wrote a wonderful piece here you so great love and i think that is beautiful just like your poem
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nicee
so true.. keep writing ur good at it.
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