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Vampire [world around me]

the world around me
comes crashing down at my feet
as i cover my ears
at every silents scream
my victums make

the blood lust is so hard to control
as i let myself go
i try to hide the pain
but i can not deny
what i have become

tell me what you feel.

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  • Aalta silver member
    June 18
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    hey this is great..... tell me ...is this inspired by twilight huh?


  • k angelz
    June 9
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    Great poem.i like it .Great write.


  • cgirl0410 silver member
    May 28

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    Love this piece. Love the prospective of it. The point of view. The way it was written was amazing. Great flow. Great write. - cgirl0410


  • Quietgirl17
    January 1

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    Hmm this is very interesting, i like it. The way you wrote it makes it have many meanings. Great write.