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what would i do without you?
you ask me from behind your paper.
i answer very matter of factly; "you would die, as would I without you"
No harm, No Foul

"Where am I to go?"
I asked as I stood on your front porch.
"anywhere but here" you replied in your ill-tempered state
No rest for the Wicked

"I have to go now"
you said from your hospital bed
"where am I to go?"
"anywhere but here" you respond as you fade away
No harm No foul.

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