spraying wormed wood holes
the ramming rolling power
wharf pounding ocean
Author notes
The raw beauty of power meeting and pounding all in its wake is magnetic and rewarding as a display of nature prevailing in its unrelenting way.
A contest entry
- Ocean Haiku poems for Chocolate-eating Peg-leg Pirate Group by Blossom Fairy.
750 points, ended January 6, 14 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Low dark skies meet stinging salt spray, can you resist the call?
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This is a powerful verse...I love the background, it adds strength to the poem. I wish I was closer to the ocean sometimes. It is a powerful and lovely force to be certain.
Az
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Thanks
Off the ratrace... Catch you later, glad to see your face this morning!
b
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Amazing, Aye, it is all of that. I love ocean poems and yours speaks out wonderfully.
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Thank you
Thanks, I have been a water person all of my life!
Best wishes with your contest.
bj
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Vibrant
Love the sheer energy your words imply! Beautiful visual and auditory offerings. Glad I am an early reader of this one. Really like the feel. Applaud all your recent writings - your great creativity in the midst of holiday overload is impressive. Keep them coming!
Iroquois
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Thank you
I made an adjustment, just did not like the way I was presenting the ocen's power.
Thank you for your encouraging words!
bj
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powerful
Your words do an outstanding job of conveying the force of nature manifested in the clash of water with weather. Like the setting and the wonderful sounds those strong words create. Really enjoyed reading this one outloud!
churchill
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Glad it spoke to you
I have made an adjustment, maybe it will be an improvement... Just did not like the way I presented the power of the ocean's hammering!
Thank you for stopping by and leaving me a message!
bj
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