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Sanctuary

Detached distant daze

Escape to places

Universes away

Images faces

Voices quelled

Impeded left forgot

Indefinitely held

Blind fully caught

Drifting the more

Internal deep space

Mental ways soar

The soul escapes...

c2009 vduna

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  • cindyloo
    January 2

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    Amazing

    You use such beautiful words in this poem and it is very well written. This has a dreamy, peaceful feeling. This made me think of what it might be like as we move from life to death. Great job!


  • DogFish silver member
    January 1
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    Ths dreams of an aviation electrician who wants to fly to the moon ...and beyond!