Separated Family,
planned on it five years before.
Ironic that it started when I came here?
When I became a full resident?
I notice the similarities.
Fighting, Fighting, Fighting.
I always thought it was my family
now I notice it's when I'm a full resident.
When I am sleeping under the roof.
Oddly enough
Moving away for a year,
brought peace between the two couples.
Or so that's what I heard.
Fives years ago,
that's the time frame.
The one for separation.
That's the time I was always sleeping here.
What is your perception of this poem? How do you feel about it? Whatcha think?
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a sad topic
Hi KaseyL
This is a sad topic for me . I always wish for couples to find strength and pull through . It is sad when families move far apart . In your last stanza there are three typos ( five years ago, frame, the one , and sleeping there .) I hope you and your loved ones find balance, forgiveness and happiness .
Smiles
Gabor
P.S. thank you for you kindness and time for reading my poem "Nautical Love"
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