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My task~

 

Prompt: simply waiting here

 

 

 

 

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Yearning for you
no wings to fly 
so I ask Allah
to grant me thee

 

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Promt: 15words simply waiting here

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  • I'm sure you will be answered. I feel reverence in this auspicious calling. Lovely feel of warmth.

  • Bruce silver member
    January 15
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    OMG, this is beautiful! You are a master of these short and yearning poems.


  • Cannonsfire
    January 9

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    No matter which god we pray to, love is universal and so are these words C


  • thepoetssoul
    January 6

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    A magnificient piece of poetry indeed.
    Splendid in its beauty and brevity.
    I love the background you use.
    May you be blessed in all you do.

    Tony


  • paulcreates silver member
    January 1
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    Beautiful prayer and beautiful background!
    Paul


  • Puppydog gold member
    January 1

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    VERY SWEET!!!!!

    A heartfelt prayer to have your love come to you if you are unable to go to them.'s


  • Swangrnv gold member
    January 1
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    amazing

    so well written my friend I see your muse is alive and well!


  • insideinsanity
    January 1

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    Hmmm!

    Well, this is the first time I've seen Muslim reference in poetry here. I must say, I love it. Excellent.

    And what's more, the poem is beautiful, simple, and a beautiful take on the prompt.


  • Hikari Lady
    January 1

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    Wow!! First time I see "Allah" used in a poem here. I like how you've done this, opened my eyes to something I should have written about so long ago, Allah.
    Good luck in the contest. Loved this write.

    Much love
    ~Noor


  • Topaze gold member
    January 1

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    Very well written and as always you chose a very nice background. Very well done and best of luck to you.


  • Unsigned gold member
    January 1
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    I really like this but...14 words

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