Prompt: simply waiting here
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Yearning for you
no wings to fly
so I ask Allah
to grant me thee
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Author notes
Promt: 15words simply waiting here
A contest entry
- 15 Words More by Unsigned.
800 points, ended January 1, 11 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Comments
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I'm sure you will be answered. I feel reverence in this auspicious calling. Lovely feel of warmth.
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OMG, this is beautiful! You are a master of these short and yearning poems.
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Thank you Bruce, you're the best!
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No matter which god we pray to, love is universal and so are these words
C
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A magnificient piece of poetry indeed.
Splendid in its beauty and brevity.
I love the background you use.
May you be blessed in all you do.
Tony
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Beautiful prayer and beautiful background!
Paul
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VERY SWEET!!!!!
A heartfelt prayer to have your love come to you if you are unable to go to them.'s
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amazing
so well written my friend I see your muse is alive and well!
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Hmmm!
Well, this is the first time I've seen Muslim reference in poetry here. I must say, I love it. Excellent.
And what's more, the poem is beautiful, simple, and a beautiful take on the prompt.
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Wow!! First time I see "Allah" used in a poem here. I like how you've done this, opened my eyes to something I should have written about so long ago, Allah.
Good luck in the contest. Loved this write.
Much love
~Noor
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Very well written and as always you chose a very nice background. Very well done and best of luck to you.
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Thanks my friend
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I really like this but...14 words
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was still editing ..sorry
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