the best way to keep me quiet
(lips on mine,
bruising) with your dayglow intricacies
and long days of //silence
where we sit together doing nothing
(bored
outofmyskull)
and saying less
In a list
A contest entry
- Pick a word - Write a poem in 10 LINES or Less (L) by The Fun House.
1050 points, ended January 11, 23 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
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Comments
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This is an interesting flow of things in this piece. It seems as though something is missing there though (in my mind). As if it is not quite finished.
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wonderful poem
you penned this well
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