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I Knew You Could

The inside happy
Comes from deep within
The feeling is better than a win.
A shinning feeling
That gives you a twinkling grin.

You know life is good
Like saying your prayers.
When you should
And knowing you did good.
When you knew you could.

A new day
That is meant for you
Everyone gives you plenty of room.
The pat on the back
And the kutoes to you.

That inside feeling when,

The Master says,
I knew you could.

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  • CarolDesjarlais silver member
    January 3

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    Whiel free verse can be rhymed, it is usually not so demanding a rhyme. I enjoyed your poem and ty for entering it.