The inside happy
Comes from deep within
The feeling is better than a win.
A shinning feeling
That gives you a twinkling grin.
You know life is good
Like saying your prayers.
When you should
And knowing you did good.
When you knew you could.
A new day
That is meant for you
Everyone gives you plenty of room.
The pat on the back
And the kutoes to you.
That inside feeling when,
The Master says,
I knew you could.
A contest entry
- To Live ~ Or To REALLY Live by CarolDesjarlais.
900 points, ended January 3, 14 entries
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Comments
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Whiel free verse can be rhymed, it is usually not so demanding a rhyme. I enjoyed your poem and ty for entering it.

