I was walking on a long misty road,
there was so much noise,
so much distraction,
every step i took forward
was followed by another one backward.
I heard voices calling my name all the time
encouraging me to come with them ,taking my hands,
helping me all the time warning me from getting lost,falling
.....or getting off the road.
Suddenly i saw darkness,
i couldn't even see where i was standing
or where i was going,
the voices told me u have failed,
u have fallen in the hole of shame.
The word failure wasn't only a word,
it lighted the fire of anger in my heart,
the light of determination in my mind.
At that moment i gained the ability to see every thing
i found my way back on the road
after i have learned how to avoid falling in the holes on my own.
Author notes
When we fall we fall alone so we must getup by our selves.
A contest entry
- FAILURES make us realize th importance of success by Purush.
650 points, ended January 1, 11 entries
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Comments
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we're never alone my friend. Great write, it flows well.
♥ Kathraina -
All the best in my contest
"The word failure wasn't only a word,
it lighted the fire of anger in my heart,
the light of determination in my mind.
At that moment i gained the ability to see every thing
i found my way back on the road
after i have learned how to avoid falling in the holes on my own."
Well phrased and nice
All the best in my contest
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