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Colored minds

 

 

 

Candy pencils.
          Rainbow thoughts.


Fresh fingers
          nourishing
                  their subsequent

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

(C) Noor 1/1/2009 

Author notes

Contest prompt:
9 words on picture above.

First poem in 2009, this year feels fantastically sweet! lolz

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  • Lavender Butterfly silver member
    January 1
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    wonderfully captivating... x


  • Puppydog gold member
    January 1

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    BEAUTIFUL!!!

    Children are the same all over the world and in every era of time. They have an open innocence and honesty which we all can take lessons from. I have seen scenes like this picture all during my years on this earth!


  • PrabhuDayal Khattar silver member
    January 1

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    Humm..the creator has created HIS universal view through HER..and that HER is you ..NOOR...Isn't a wonderful task by you NOOR ?...


  • Harrisham Minhas
    January 1

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    Aww...this is sweet.
    Good luck in the contest.