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Neverending...

Head spinning,
Blood streaming down my wrists.

Something I can't stop,
Something I can't resist.

It's like an addiction;
Once you've started, you can't stop.

You keep going until you die;
The floor will *thud* from your drop.

The pain, the crying;
Stops nothing.

I keep going;
As if I'm trying to accomplish something.

All I feel is the want to bleed;
Can anyone tell me why?

It helps nothing;
It just makes me cry.

I can't help myself;
I keep giving in.

And until my heart stops;
The bleeding will never end...

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  • Justmenow
    January 4

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    this is great its such an addictive thing and when you do start doing it it is so hard to stop, great work and so dark and emotive showing how good a writer you are


    • chasitylee
      January 4
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      thank you alot, and yeah, its veeeeeery addictive,......unfortunately...

      much love,
      Chasity♥


  • xXCadyBabbiXx
    January 2
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    This is good.
    Very good.
    Thank you for entering.

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