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a boy, a girl , and a yellow lab

 

 

 

      paved canvass...
      we create wonderland

      in a concrete world

 

 

 

 

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artwork by Brian Jekel

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  • ajocean silver member
    July 15
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    i loooooooooooove this


    • sense surreal gold member
      July 21
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      thank you aj...for reading me...I haven't been around here lately and I really appreciate you taking time to read my writes...


      Anna Lee


  • Pheo
    March 14

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    How sweet! Meaningful for adults and children alike and so true.


  • xbroken.angelx
    March 14
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    wonderfully said.


  • AutumnGypsy gold member
    March 14

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    This is so beautiful. sometimes we have to make our own worlds without always having everything. Beautifully done here


  • Lee Tai Wah
    February 1
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    Hi Anna Lee

    Amazing! Beautiful description.

  • Bruce silver member
    January 31
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    Anna - thought I would drop in and see your other side. This poem is absolutely beautiful.How well you have captured the scene in a few words!

  • Bruce silver member
    January 31

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    Anna - thought I would drop in and see your other side. This poem is absolutely beautiful.How well you have captured the scene in a few words!


    • sense surreal gold member
      February 1
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      Thank you for checking me here as well and esp for the comment

      Anna Lee


  • Tqop
    January 18
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    Beautiful, and sweet.


  • morgana raven Greeters member
    January 17

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    Wonderful choice of words to match a awesome little picture. I think everyone did something like this as a kid, great work.
    Laura


  • poeticweaver gold member
    January 1

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    Perfectly Expressed!

    Bravo, I like how you captured this prompt!
    All the best in this contest!

    Peace, Timothy


  • Lavender Butterfly silver member
    January 1
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    wonderful... x


  • bigperm gold member
    January 1
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    beautifully painted...

    kind of like Mary Poppins.


  • Mozaic
    January 1

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    True words of wisdom...great observation...good luck in the contest!


    • sense surreal gold member
      January 1
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      Hi Ms Mo Happy New Year at saka Salamat hehe wisdumb lang ang meron ako


  • Ken-Maverick
    January 1

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    So very true indeed my friend,
    9 words that says more than 9 lines could
    Well done and all the best in the contest

    Ken


  • whispernthedark Greeters member
    January 1

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    I love the visualization of this. Great take.

    ♥
    whisper


  • charcoal
    January 1
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    i like it (:

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