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Summer Song

Silent;
Ever so quietly;
Summer speaks.

A summer song;
A summer symphony.

Magestic,
Clear,
But sensed;
Wind runs wildley among the leaves,
playing a game with them.

Bright;
Powerful,
Life giving;
Sun gives light,
Gives life to those in need.

Soft blades;
Warm feel,
Grass gives the feel of comfort.

You and me;
Lying under the sun,
On the grass,
Wind in our hair;
Listening;
To silence...


       

A contest entry

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  • Nice write. It seemed very flowy and beautiful. I liked it. You did an excellent job on writing this. Thank you very much for entering my contest. Again, nice write, best of luck, and I hope all is well


  • Sacred Geometry
    January 19
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    thankyou very much for entering, i like this poem alot


  • Kathraina silver member
    January 3

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    Great piece. Flows well and I love the simplicity of it. And even though its simple it still has lots of imagery. Wonderful job, and good luck in the contest

    ♥ Kathraina


  • Scyphon
    January 1

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    I really liked this one, but the best part was the very end of the poem, last stanza, it made my heart jump. Well done and best of luck to you in the contest ^_^


  • Lady Michaella
    January 1

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    OO
    this is beautiful. Beautiful picture in my mind, This is written excellently and perfectly suits the prompt.
    x!

    • chasitylee
      January 1
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      haha thanks, i switched up the ending a lil bit...:]
      and hey this is actually a POEM contest im entering this time...-lol-


      • Lady Michaella
        January 1
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        haha
        that was really funny, no offence. now, i might say, even more beautiful poem.
        x

        • chasitylee
          January 1
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          lol none taken
          why thank ya!

          i wasnt really sure wat to write, it took me like 5 mins, so i wasnt sure how it was going to turn out...-lol-

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