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[ past last year imagining ]

past last year imagining
subtleties in the hands of a lover
a soft whittled tune on my guitar
and the banjo of a new year
sparkling and bright

I found a passion in the movement of words
and learned to type like a poet
that was my year
as my niece turned her years
and began to talk in interesting sentences
and I loved the break of Christmas
the taste of honeyed ham and cider
the delicate touch of my casual lover
and the trials of a new season.

Author notes

all in all it was a good year.

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  • I am so glad you found a passion in the movement of words. Thank you for sharing & entering. ~~Iridessa~~