Empty Jars
Canopic
Awaiting Sweet Blood
Of The Innocent
The Vaces
Hungry
They Clatter For Their Fill
Organs, Souls, Lives
I Must Follow
Obey
I Will Fill Those Thirsty Glasses
And Silence Will Fall Once More
Empty Jars
Canopic
Awaiting Sweet Blood
Of The Innocent
The Vaces
Hungry
They Clatter For Their Fill
Organs, Souls, Lives
I Must Follow
Obey
I Will Fill Those Thirsty Glasses
And Silence Will Fall Once More
A contest entry
- Anyone UP For A Nooner? Pic Prompt by lunarlunacy.
400 points, ended January 12, 10 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
so please tell me what you think???
Comments
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An excellent dark piece, fab take on the pic (which is kinda awesome
) You've created some eerie imagery and the background matches perfectly. Superbly done, good luck
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wow
A freaky dark and creepy piece..LOVED IT!! you have a
fantastic talent my friend!
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That picture is completely disturbing....None the less you've done very well with your words in this write. Bravo.
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Wow !
I really like the way that you have summed this poem up with your word's. As well as the Back Ground is very suitable for it. I must follow. Obey. I will fill those thirsty Glasses, And silence will fall once more 1 Good Ending on your poem that you have written hrer ! Good Luck In This Contest ! Blessings be to you always, Brenda Gae
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interesting write and a wild but darkly calming bg
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