Everywhere you go
I want to be
Forever by your side
I want to be
The one you love
I want to be
I am
The one who loves you
Please tell me what you think
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Hoodwinked!
Once again, a great write. As others have noted, the repitition in this piece adds just the right amount of impact to make it clear "you are the one."
Luv in Christ, BonnieQ
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HOODWINKED!!!
Yay a short love poem!! Well done the repition and the length both hit the point home that there are no arguments, you are this persons love, end of line. Really well written and the flow is amazing!!
Well done
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Hoodwinked
Oh, this piece is gorgeous. I love how it is short but it speaks volumes. What a great piece. Keep it up.
Always write from the heart
Never give up
Kate
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Hoodwinked!
A beautful heartfelt poem of love, so much emotion
expressed in so few well chosen words George
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HOODWINKED!
So romantic, and that is the way it should always be. What you feel is what you are, and you described it well.
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Hood Wink!
What a beautiful write;
To be that one is a gift and a cherishable life to lead, You have expressed your hearts desire lovely and sweetly
♥
Stay safe
~Manda
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I love love poetry. True love is rare indeed. It is the strongest force in the world. Good luck to you in your future writes.
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