You never showed
And now I'm scared
The night before
You said some things
And when you left
I prayed for you
But now I don't know
Where you are
Please tell me what you think
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Hoodwinked!
You are a master at penning powerful impacts in just a few words. This one clearly reveals what we all, at some time or other, have felt about someone in our life. For me, it usually was my mother when she, once again, would threaten suicide then carry out the threat. Alas, she finally succeeded at the young age just short of her 58th birthday. Well done, dear poet!
Luv in Christ, BonnieQ
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HOOD-WINK!!!
Great poem. Aren't we all, at some point in our lifes, wondering where people , whom we cared for, wandered off to?
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Hood-Winked!
This is an interesting poem - I like the depth that you have shown with the last two lines
Polly
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Hoodwinked !
A sad unwished for departure of a dear one after some cross words emotionaly expressed in a few suscinct but adequate phrases.quite sad ...George
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Hood Wink!
Sadly penned;
What a sad ending to a strong poem; You have a great talent for expressing so much in just a few lines
♥
Stay safe
~Manda
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I know how to worry. When we love the people we love, we can't help but worry about them. Thank you fo sharing your poetry.
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