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Weakness

I know that I do
I know that I don't
And all that I want
But I know that I won't
And all I should say
I won't say a word
So simple, it seems
These hard to speak words
I know what to do
I know what to say
I bow my head
I walk away

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  • judmc
    January 15

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    Hoodwinked!

    an interesting insight into a sad but indecisive
    mindset well expressed in a few concise phrases
    quite moving,Well done.... George


  • Manda Kathryn Greeters member
    January 15

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    Hood Wink!

    Heart touching;

    Walking away can be the hardest thing we do in life, no matter what we're walking away from, You have expressed that well in this

    ♥
    Stay safe
    ~Manda


  • Lady Altheia
    January 2

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    hmm I can see where you are oing with this piece. It is hard to follow without any prompt or clues. Best of luck to you in your future writes.