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Stuck Between Days

Sun scrape my window
Wake me from these
Wake me, come save me
Erase these memories
I scream as I reach for...
You fade away
I'm left here with nothing
Stuck between days
Twisting and turning
And crumbling away
I scream as I reach for...
You fade away
Left me with nothing
Just left me as nothing
Sun scrape my window
Defeat these dreams
Break me free from this space
Where I live between days
Wake me, come save me

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  • Manda Kathryn Greeters member
    January 15

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    Hood Wink!

    Great ending;

    We all need to be woken but sometimes no one is there to do so - I like how you expressed that so passionately yet tenderly in this

    ♥
    Stay safe
    ~Manda


  • Lady Altheia
    January 2

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    Dreams are our unconscious trying to speak to us. like the repition. It is kinda like lyrics. Good luck to you n your future writes.